suggesting. backing away.

[aslant]

in and skin: the chrome fender, the flickering bulb.

applied forces distance/time and momentum. and inertia. physics and the art of suspension.

thinking. no, dreaming. pushing it. pushing it. pushing
it.

in a bind. in a blind. sideswept. overturned/upturned. losing the moon trajectory. the linear arc in the sky and the platonic planes. inability to conjecture.

forces of perfection, or absorption. pulling it out. drawing it out. up to the surface. the vein the skin.


[and all this coalesces pools condenses on the oxide rich air and in my red rich lungs.]

Comments

[booshtukka.livejournal.com]

I like that. but I don't get it all. come explain, jesse.

why did you go quiet?

Re:

[aslant.livejournal.com]

why did i go quiet?

you went quiet. i stopped getting replies all of a sudden. hm.

also i have to leave. but that's not why i was quiet.

this isn't finished yet. it's just ideas of a poem. it's not there yet. playing with words. pushing around different stuff. trying to dredge up some imagery & failing to make it coherent.

[booshtukka.livejournal.com]

I didn't go quiet. something else must have done. a server somewhere.

I still like it.

goodnight, jesse. don't tell me what happens in shrek. I love you.

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Re:

[aslant.livejournal.com]

won't breathe a word.

love you.

hey!

[aslant.livejournal.com]

dammit, where'd you go all of a sudden?

i've been sabotaged.

Re: hey!

[booshtukka.livejournal.com]

I think your yahoo mail must be having problems.

I'm ok this end.

Re: hey!

[aslant.livejournal.com]

stupid yahoo.

okay. a minute then i switch off this machine. love you. sweet dreams.